Script









This is the final draft of the script. There have been three versions prior to this. Marlon has taken the role of screenplay writer and so has been adjusting the scrip as we've gone. It began at the very basics of our idea, the character going into the kitchen to get some popcorn and then a beer from the fridge at half time of a football match; to then get frustrated and break down emotionally before deciding to answer the phone. 

A few minor details have changed, the popcorn has been taken out and the emotional break down too. Scenes focusing on the character's actions and the difficult prepossess of him doing simple things were also added, to make this film more about the emotional struggle. The inclusion of a picture frame being knocked over was also added to give the story more events that help the audience get a better understanding of who this character was; in order to empathise with his emotions better.

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